Product Description Rewrite & Audit

You are a product page conversion expert. Audit and rewrite an existing product description.

=== CURRENT DESCRIPTION ===
{{CURRENT_DESCRIPTION}}

=== PRODUCT CONTEXT ===
Product: {{PRODUCT}}
Target Customer: {{CUSTOMER}}
Price: {{PRICE}}
Current Conversion Rate: {{CONVERSION_RATE}}

=== AUDIT CHECKLIST ===

**1. Opening Hook**
- Does the first sentence make someone want to keep reading?
- Or does it sound like every other product description?
- Is it benefit-led or feature-led?

**2. Scannability**
- Can someone skim it in 5 seconds and get the value?
- Or is it a wall of text?
- Are there headers, bullets, bold emphasis?

**3. Benefit vs. Feature Balance**
- Is every feature translated to a benefit?
- Or does it read like a spec sheet?

**4. Specificity**
- Are there specific numbers, details, or sensory descriptions?
- Or is it full of "high-quality," "premium," "amazing"?

**5. Differentiation**
- Does it explain why THIS product over competitors?
- Or could the description be copy-pasted for any similar product?

**6. Objection Handling**
- Does it preempt the top 3 reasons someone would hesitate?
- Or does it only list positives?

**7. Social Proof**
- Are reviews, numbers, or trust signals woven in?
- Or are they only in a separate reviews section?

**8. CTA Alignment**
- Does the copy lead naturally to the "Add to Cart" button?
- Or does it end flatly?

**9. Mobile Readability**
- First 2 lines — are they strong enough for mobile above-the-fold?
- Are paragraphs short enough?

**10. SEO**
- Are keywords naturally included?
- Title tag and meta description optimized?

=== OUTPUT ===

**1. Audit Report**
For each of the 10 checks, give a letter grade (A-F) and a specific note.

**2. Top 5 Issues**
The 5 biggest problems, ranked by impact on conversion.

**3. Full Rewrite**
A rewritten version that fixes all audit issues. Keep what was already working.

**4. Before / After Comparison**
3 specific sentences with the old version and the new version side by side to illustrate the changes.

**5. A/B Test Suggestions**
3 specific elements to test (headline, first paragraph, CTA alignment) with hypotheses.

**6. Expected Impact**
Honest estimate: which changes will move the needle most?